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Wednesday, May 16, 2001
at 14:51
Barbara Bloomfield
Congratulations, Tim , on
last night's production. We greatly enjoyed it. Lots of good jokes.
Very well acted too.
One or two lines that could hit the area marked bin, perhaps?
all the best
Barbara
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Thursday,
May 17, 2001 at 12:01
Alice
Brown
Congrats on a very funny,
very well-structured play with hilarious dialogue - and thanks for a
good night out!
Sorry I can't go into detail. I wasn't paying the detailed attention
of a would-be reviewer, just enjoying myself, and often laughing out
loud - which is quite unusual for me, so that's a compliment in itself.
I really enjoyed all the performances - though the best man definitely
stood out as a real comic character with his amused grin and endearingly
sick sense of humour.
I often find fast-shifting short scenes irritating, but here it seemed
absolutely right for the play (though you might perhaps have made more
of the opportunities for additional humour at the point of changing
scene, by having more of a connection/cross-over between the two locations)
Have you tried selling it anywhere? Might it be a TV sitcom? And why
aren't you famous already?
Best regards, Alice
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